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Now just get rid of the confusion "..." dots and it'll be perfect!
One suggestion, though--delete this unread if you don't want one:
Her breast armor is turned too far toward us, going by both the angle of her shoulders and the indented line from breastbone to navel. The armor's center line between the breast cups should be aligned even further leftward (from our point of view) than her body's center line, because it is a raised surface. Please let me know if this makes no sense; 3D alignment is hard to describe.
--Nonie
I'm aware of it for some time. It changes here and there while sketching so I get mistaken often.. and I just carry on.. most of times
Thanks so much for your attention and your feedback
In any case, despite that alignment problem, this was well drawn!
--Nonie