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moon v3 by aodemir moon v3 by aodemir
Proud Stoic Honorable Soldier and someone else there I almost missed!
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KeirTanaka Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Proud Stoic Honorable Soldier...oh and there's someone else there I almost missed!

Those:above:were just a "few" of the words that could've gone in the description of this set!
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:iconaodemir:
Wish granted. :)
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KeirTanaka Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I wasn't "holding my breath" exactly but that's great! It's funny you actually kept the part about the other person in the back!
Now just get rid of the confusion "..." dots and it'll be perfect!
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Correction made. :)
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KeirTanaka Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
@#$%& Righteous!
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:icongallardose:
this is great! very good drawn, and nice mood!
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:iconnonier:
An amazing picture!

One suggestion, though--delete this unread if you don't want one:

Her breast armor is turned too far toward us, going by both the angle of her shoulders and the indented line from breastbone to navel. The armor's center line between the breast cups should be aligned even further leftward (from our point of view) than her body's center line, because it is a raised surface. Please let me know if this makes no sense; 3D alignment is hard to describe.

--Nonie
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:iconaodemir:
I'm surprised to have such feedback ( You'd guess ) :)

I'm aware of it for some time. It changes here and there while sketching so I get mistaken often.. and I just carry on.. most of times :)

Thanks so much for your attention and your feedback :)
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:iconnonier:
Yeah, it's always a tradeoff; we want to fix our old work, but we'd rather put our time and skills into new art. I understand completely.

In any case, despite that alignment problem, this was well drawn!

--Nonie
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Thanks again :)
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